Comments on: My Shayari is now alive http://shayariadab.wordpress.com/2007/03/04/my-shayari-is-now-alive/ Kuch dil ki daastaan...... Sun, 18 Jan 2009 04:08:39 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Abdul Qadeer http://shayariadab.wordpress.com/2007/03/04/my-shayari-is-now-alive/#comment-560 Abdul Qadeer Sun, 18 Jan 2009 04:08:39 +0000 http://shayariadab.wordpress.com/2007/03/04/my-shayari-is-now-alive/#comment-560 Ye Ghazal maine Phlestine ki basbasi ko khuli ankhoon se dekhne wale har wo arab country ko dyhan me rakhte howe likhi hai !! aur kiske against me likhi app mere isharoon se samjh jayen agar ghazal tak pahonch gaye to !!tawajo chahonga !! Sub milke uske qilaaf awaz uthate kyoon nahi !! Jo zinda ho agar to zinda nazar ate kyoon nahi !! Agar eak ho ja-o-ge tum to gazi kahela-o-ge !! Apni taqath ko eak baar azmate kyoon nahi !! Jo zinda ho agar to zinda nazar ate kyoon nahi !! Tumhari sar zameen pe paida howe umar aur hussain !! Leke howi jazba had se guzar jate kyoon nahi !! Jo zinda ho agar to zinda nazar ate kyoon nahi !! Duniya ke har daur me tumne fate payi hai !! Is daur me bhi ayyub ki tariq dahorate kyoon nahi !! Jo zinda ho agar to zinda nazar ate kyoon nahi !! Tumhari sarzameen se milti hai pure alam ko raushni !! Fir apne andheroon me charag jalate kyoon nahi !! Jo zinda ho agar to zinda nazar ate kyoon nahi !! Allah bakshe ga unhe hussain ke hausle qadeer !! Bus eak baar wo apne hausloon ko azamate kyoon nahi !! Jo zinda ho agar to zinda nazar ate kyoon nahi !! Sub milke uske qilaaf awaz uthate kyoon nahi !! Qadeer Toopchi An Indian Ye Ghazal maine Phlestine ki basbasi ko khuli ankhoon se dekhne wale har wo arab country ko dyhan me rakhte howe likhi hai !! aur kiske against me likhi app mere isharoon se samjh jayen agar ghazal tak pahonch gaye to !!tawajo chahonga !!

Sub milke uske qilaaf awaz uthate kyoon nahi !!
Jo zinda ho agar to zinda nazar ate kyoon nahi !!

Agar eak ho ja-o-ge tum to gazi kahela-o-ge !!
Apni taqath ko eak baar azmate kyoon nahi !!

Jo zinda ho agar to zinda nazar ate kyoon nahi !!

Tumhari sar zameen pe paida howe umar aur hussain !!
Leke howi jazba had se guzar jate kyoon nahi !!

Jo zinda ho agar to zinda nazar ate kyoon nahi !!

Duniya ke har daur me tumne fate payi hai !!
Is daur me bhi ayyub ki tariq dahorate kyoon nahi !!

Jo zinda ho agar to zinda nazar ate kyoon nahi !!

Tumhari sarzameen se milti hai pure alam ko raushni !!
Fir apne andheroon me charag jalate kyoon nahi !!

Jo zinda ho agar to zinda nazar ate kyoon nahi !!

Allah bakshe ga unhe hussain ke hausle qadeer !!
Bus eak baar wo apne hausloon ko azamate kyoon nahi !!

Jo zinda ho agar to zinda nazar ate kyoon nahi !!

Sub milke uske qilaaf awaz uthate kyoon nahi !!

Qadeer Toopchi
An Indian

]]> By: shayariadab http://shayariadab.wordpress.com/2007/03/04/my-shayari-is-now-alive/#comment-548 shayariadab Thu, 15 Jan 2009 15:40:51 +0000 http://shayariadab.wordpress.com/2007/03/04/my-shayari-is-now-alive/#comment-548 Qadeer Ji, Aapse hum wakhif hain...Yoindia pe Celmira/Talat ke naam se aap hume bhi jaante hain... Bohot bohot shukriya...bas jo dil main aata hai wo likh dete hain...kahin se seekha to nahin..bas ummeed karte hain ki padhne waalon ko pasand aayega..... Shukriya Qadeer Ji,

Aapse hum wakhif hain…Yoindia pe Celmira/Talat ke naam se aap hume bhi jaante hain…

Bohot bohot shukriya…bas jo dil main aata hai wo likh dete hain…kahin se seekha to nahin..bas ummeed karte hain ki padhne waalon ko pasand aayega…..

Shukriya

]]> By: Abdul Qadeer http://shayariadab.wordpress.com/2007/03/04/my-shayari-is-now-alive/#comment-529 Abdul Qadeer Mon, 22 Dec 2008 07:21:03 +0000 http://shayariadab.wordpress.com/2007/03/04/my-shayari-is-now-alive/#comment-529 dearest Shayara !! Apki har Ghazal,har sher ,har Alfaz apke bahetar mustaqbil ki misal hai !! sunchene aur likhna ka hunar hi hai jo insaan ko kamiyaab banata hai aur apki shayari se wo jhalakta hai !! likhte raho jab tak ko duniya tumhari shayari ko nasihat na manlen !! waise hum bhi kabhi kabhi likhne ki koshish kiya karte hain Duva karoke mere qalam ki taqath barqarar rahe !! Kindest Regards . Abdul Qadeer From Dubai But an Indian dearest Shayara !!

Apki har Ghazal,har sher ,har Alfaz apke bahetar mustaqbil ki misal hai !! sunchene aur likhna ka hunar hi hai jo insaan ko kamiyaab banata hai aur apki shayari se wo jhalakta hai !! likhte raho jab tak ko duniya tumhari shayari ko nasihat na manlen !! waise hum bhi kabhi kabhi likhne ki koshish kiya karte hain Duva karoke mere qalam ki taqath barqarar rahe !!

Kindest Regards .

Abdul Qadeer
From Dubai But an Indian

]]> By: shayariadab http://shayariadab.wordpress.com/2007/03/04/my-shayari-is-now-alive/#comment-364 shayariadab Sun, 24 Feb 2008 00:57:46 +0000 http://shayariadab.wordpress.com/2007/03/04/my-shayari-is-now-alive/#comment-364 Hi Zayaf, Thank You for your appreciation...Sorry I was a biy busy and could not come here from a long time...I will try to compose few lines on "Humsafar", if you still need that...Please keep visiting the blog. Shayara ! Hi Zayaf,

Thank You for your appreciation…Sorry I was a biy busy and could not come here from a long time…I will try to compose few lines on “Humsafar”, if you still need that…Please keep visiting the blog.

Shayara !

]]> By: ZAYAF http://shayariadab.wordpress.com/2007/03/04/my-shayari-is-now-alive/#comment-357 ZAYAF Sat, 26 Jan 2008 07:56:37 +0000 http://shayariadab.wordpress.com/2007/03/04/my-shayari-is-now-alive/#comment-357 Dear Ms.Shayara, As-Salaamualaykum, Read your shayari and they are all heart warming and most beautiful. I need a few more lines if you can write on the topic "Humsafar". Would be grateful for your kind reply to me at letmecusoon@hotmail.com Take care Zayaf Dear Ms.Shayara, As-Salaamualaykum,
Read your shayari and they are all heart warming and most beautiful. I need a few more lines if you can write on the topic “Humsafar”. Would be grateful for your kind reply to me at letmecusoon@hotmail.com

Take care
Zayaf

]]> By: shayariadab http://shayariadab.wordpress.com/2007/03/04/my-shayari-is-now-alive/#comment-59 shayariadab Thu, 10 May 2007 13:30:07 +0000 http://shayariadab.wordpress.com/2007/03/04/my-shayari-is-now-alive/#comment-59 Dear Sweetu, Aaj aapki ye baat parh ke laga jaise mera likhna kaamyaab ho gaya....isse zyada khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hai ki maine jo likha wo aapko apna likha sa lagta hai.... Koshish jaari rahegi likhne ki...bas aap yunhi parhti raha karen... bohot bohot shukriya, Aapki Shayara Dear Sweetu,

Aaj aapki ye baat parh ke laga jaise mera likhna kaamyaab ho gaya….isse zyada khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hai ki maine jo likha wo aapko apna likha sa lagta hai….

Koshish jaari rahegi likhne ki…bas aap yunhi parhti raha karen…

bohot bohot shukriya,

Aapki Shayara

]]> By: sweetu http://shayariadab.wordpress.com/2007/03/04/my-shayari-is-now-alive/#comment-56 sweetu Tue, 08 May 2007 15:01:14 +0000 http://shayariadab.wordpress.com/2007/03/04/my-shayari-is-now-alive/#comment-56 Miss Shayra, Aapki shayri aur nazam bahut pasand ayi. aisa laga jaise mere hi ander baith kar likha hai. mere hi alfaz hai aur meri hi soch hai. aur bbhi shayri aur gazal likhte rahiyega aur hume bhejte rahiyega. shukriya un alfazon ke liye jo kabhi humare zahen main aye aur apne use shabdon ka rukh diya. bahut bahut pyar ke saath.. sweetu Miss Shayra,
Aapki shayri aur nazam bahut pasand ayi. aisa laga jaise mere hi ander baith kar likha hai. mere hi alfaz hai aur meri hi soch hai.
aur bbhi shayri aur gazal likhte rahiyega aur hume bhejte rahiyega. shukriya un alfazon ke liye jo kabhi humare zahen main aye aur apne use shabdon ka rukh diya.
bahut bahut pyar ke saath..
sweetu

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