Jo main na rahun, aankhon main aansoo na bharna tum
Is dil pe hai bas naam tumhara, yeh yaqeen rakhna tum
Main hoon tere sath, tu humraah hai mere har qadam
Door ho kar bhi kahan ek doosre se hain door hum
Guzarta har pal, har lamha tere aur qareeb kar deta hai
Saanson ki yeh dor teri saanson ke sang jod deta hai
Mere humdum, mere humnawa, pyar tera, meri zindagi
Khuda ke baad, main karun dil se bas teri hi bandagi !!
Appke lafz me hai itna ghum!
Ke Hogaye shamil aap ke deewano me hum!!
Khuda ne apni rahmath barsyahoga jab likhne chale the!
Rakhna khayam apni sihayi ka ye aalam!
Alfaz nahi aap ki tareef karneko bus itna kahte hai ke lajawab ho tum!!
Aap ka bohot bohot shukriya ki humari qalam se nikla kalaam aap ko is qadar pasand aaya….aap yunhi parhte rahen, hum yunhi likhte rahenge….Shukriya !
Good Work……I appreciate
Thank you very much Manish…bas yunhi parhte rahiyega !
Aapki ye kavita dil ko choo gayi……..
Behad achhi likhi hai……..
Bohot bohot shukriya Nirjhar…..bas yunhi parhte rahiyega !!
maar kar bhi agar kisi ke dil mein jagah mil jaye too shayad woh maut zindagi se bhi jyada khoobsubat hogi, iska ehsaas toh tha lekin, naa is duniya mein naa uss duniya mein mahobat mahein raas aayi.whatever u t too gud,simply outstanding,lucky person atleast can give words too ur feelings,ppl like me r not gud with this also.keep writing!
Bohot bohot shukriya aapka…..parhte rahiyega…kabhi kabhi dil ka dard alfaaz main dhalte der nahin lagti !
mere sabar ka na le imtehan
meri khamoshi ko saza na dee
ju tere baghair na g sake
usse jenay ki dua na dee
tu aziz dil o nazar se hai
tu kareeb rago jan se hai
mere jismo jaan ka yeh fasla
kahin waqt ko barha na dee
tujhe bhool ka na bhula sakon
tujhe chah k na pa sakon
meri hasratoon ko shamar kar
meri chahton ka sila na dee
tujhe kabhi milain furstain
meri sham ko phir sawar dee
ju katal karna hai katal kar
yun jadaion ki saza na dee
Mudassar, aapne bohot achcha likha hai.
kisne kaha hai hum tumko bhul gaye
aai dost ye afva kise aur ne udaye hogi
shaan se rahege tere dil me
itne dino me kuch to jaga banai hoge
Bohot khoob Abdull..thanks for writing here
sirf yadoo ke silsila rehgaya
khuda jane unse hamara kya rishta rehgaya
ek chand chupke gaya jane kaha
ek sitara use dhund to reh gaya