Just a humble request to readers…If you like my poetry and share it at any other site, please write with my reference because a poet writes with lots of emotions and seeing that work under someone else’s name is very painful !
Mausam ka ishaara hai abhi na jaaiye
Tod ke yoon dil humara, na jaaiye !
Bahaar ke rang ghule hain fizaaon main
Bahaar ke aanchal se uth kar na jaaiye !
Zamane ki gardishen ruk to nahin jayengi
Dunya ki khatir humko chorh ke na jaaiye !
Jaane se aapke rooth ke baithe hain hum
Ab humko manane ki khatir hi na jaaiye !
Aankhon ki chamak humse chupate hain aap kyun
Aarzuon ne li hain angdaaiyan, abhi na jaaiye !
nice shayari…………
good keep it up/….
Thanks a lot Depanshu
Liknay ka andaaz aapka bahut he niraala hai
aisa koi saath milay ye ada bhi niraala hai
Thanks a lot Rama for your sweet comment
wow …. wow
baht hi acha lkha hai
fantastic
teri shabdon mein khudko kahin paya tha maine,
aur unhi mein kahin kho diya,
muskurana sikhaya tha tune jin aankhon ko,
hanste hue un aankho ne ro diya!!!
nice job…this poem of yours. m a poet myself. get in touch if possible.
ian.
Shukriya..zarra nawazi hai aapki
Khoobsurat
tah-e-dil se shukriya aapa RITZ
Thanks a lot Ian, you can always contact me on my blog
hi din beetay jo aap ke sath kabhi na bhool payenge jab yaad tumari aayegii aankhon se aansoo bhi aayenge
Nice one Perabh
Bahut hi piyara likha hai Talat aap ne.!! Hope everything is going on fine. jalad hi aao se baat kerte hai
Thanks so much Tosha
I m so busy these days……..but hope to meet you there soon….take care