Meri mohabbat ki bas itni si kahani hai
Dard main doobi hui yeh zindagani hai
Rista hai zakhm ban ke aankh ka aansu
Rooh par jafaaon ki gehri nishaani hai
Saansen hain lekin dhadkanen nahin hain
Lahu thama sa hai, na koi ravaani hai
Kho diya jisne umar bhar ka sukoon
Muskurati hai phir bhi, ladki deewani hai !!
Shayari-adab : Miss Shayara's Original Shayari 
ur shayri is really cooooooooooolllllllll
Thank You Mariam…I am trying to improve myself 🙂
thanke you mariam
Sir, yeh shayari Mariam ki nahin hai. Woh toh humko thanx de rahi hai for writing this nazm.
Shukriya !
Meri mohabbat ki bas itni si kahani hai
Dard main doobi hui yeh zindagani hai
Rista hai zakhm ban ke aankh ka aansu
Rooh par jafaaon ki gehri nishaani hai
Saansen hain lekin dhadkanen nahin hain
Lahu thama sa hai, na koi ravaani hai
Kho diya jisne umar bhar ka sukoon
Muskurati hai phir bhi, ladki deewani hai !!
Hi Rohit,
Aap kuch kehna chahte the ? kyunki aapne humari hi poem ko yahan likha par aapka koi comment nai mila !
Thanks for coming here.
Hello shayariadab ji..jus a bit same as urs ..hehe …hope u like it..
Meri mohabbat ki itni si kahani hai..
tooti hui kashti aur ruka hua paani hai…
ek gulab jo unki kitaabh may dam tor chuka hai,
aur unko pata hee nahi yeh kiski nishaani hai…
Nice Arjun Singh Ji ! 🙂
Yaar aap logon ne yeh shayari kahan se sikhi ,,mujhe bhi bata don
Thanks Shalu…Bas feelings ke sath likhne baithe to apneaap lafz jud jaate hain 🙂
Woh roye to mooh mod ke roye,jaane kya majboori thi jo dil tod ke roye,mere saamne tukde kar diye meri tasweer ke,our mere peechhe unhe jod ke roye…
Nice one Subuhi
bahut acha likha hai ji
u r so good with meter but plz do write in hindi font or in udru
coz this is the rigth way or writing poetry of urdu and hindi..
other wise u may bad with meter………
ek meri taraf se bhi aad kar len
bas teri surat lagti hai nazar inme
na janu ankehn bhoori ya aasmani hai
bas teri hi surat aati hai nazar inme
na janu ankehn bhoori ya aasmani hai
Thanks so much Janumanu……I really appreciate your comments…I write this way because I am not good with written hindi..and if I write in urdu fonts, most of the people wont understand 🙂
Bohot khoob likha hai aapne 🙂
shayariadab ji u r weite really too good poems. kya kahe shabd hi kam pad hate hai aap ki poem ko padte. bahoot khoob likha hai ap ne.
kuchh line main bhi ap se shear karti hu.
mere gam aur tere julmo sitam tol sake,
KASH ki Irjaad me, koi aisa bhi Tarazoo aaye…..
Aap ka bohot bohot shukriya Neha…aapko pasand aaya mera likha hua……Apne ne bhi bohot achcha likha hai dera..
Thanks,
Shayara
(Talat)