Jo main na rahun…!!

Jo main na rahun, aankhon main aansoo na bharna tum

Is dil pe hai bas naam tumhara, yeh yaqeen rakhna tum

Main hoon tere sath, tu humraah hai mere har qadam

Door ho kar bhi kahan ek doosre se hain door hum

Guzarta har pal, har lamha tere aur qareeb kar deta hai

Saanson ki yeh dor teri saanson ke sang jod deta hai

Mere humdum, mere humnawa, pyar tera, meri zindagi

Khuda ke baad, main karun dil se bas teri hi bandagi !!

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13 Responses to “Jo main na rahun…!!”


  1. 1 rashid April 18, 2007 at 10:14 am

    Appke lafz me hai itna ghum!
    Ke Hogaye shamil aap ke deewano me hum!!

    Khuda ne apni rahmath barsyahoga jab likhne chale the!
    Rakhna khayam apni sihayi ka ye aalam!
    Alfaz nahi aap ki tareef karneko bus itna kahte hai ke lajawab ho tum!!

  2. 2 shayariadab April 18, 2007 at 11:24 am

    Aap ka bohot bohot shukriya ki humari qalam se nikla kalaam aap ko is qadar pasand aaya….aap yunhi parhte rahen, hum yunhi likhte rahenge….Shukriya !

  3. 3 Manish Kumar Gupta May 17, 2007 at 5:12 am

    Good Work……I appreciate

  4. 4 shayariadab May 17, 2007 at 5:31 pm

    Thank you very much Manish…bas yunhi parhte rahiyega !

  5. 5 Nirjhar May 20, 2007 at 11:11 am

    Aapki ye kavita dil ko choo gayi……..
    Behad achhi likhi hai……..

  6. 6 shayariadab May 21, 2007 at 4:27 pm

    Bohot bohot shukriya Nirjhar…..bas yunhi parhte rahiyega !!

  7. 7 ifonlyi May 22, 2007 at 10:45 am

    maar kar bhi agar kisi ke dil mein jagah mil jaye too shayad woh maut zindagi se bhi jyada khoobsubat hogi, iska ehsaas toh tha lekin, naa is duniya mein naa uss duniya mein mahobat mahein raas aayi.whatever u t too gud,simply outstanding,lucky person atleast can give words too ur feelings,ppl like me r not gud with this also.keep writing!

  8. 8 shayariadab May 23, 2007 at 8:36 pm

    Bohot bohot shukriya aapka…..parhte rahiyega…kabhi kabhi dil ka dard alfaaz main dhalte der nahin lagti !

  9. 9 mudassar ahmed August 7, 2007 at 8:54 am

    mere sabar ka na le imtehan
    meri khamoshi ko saza na dee
    ju tere baghair na g sake
    usse jenay ki dua na dee
    tu aziz dil o nazar se hai
    tu kareeb rago jan se hai
    mere jismo jaan ka yeh fasla
    kahin waqt ko barha na dee
    tujhe bhool ka na bhula sakon
    tujhe chah k na pa sakon
    meri hasratoon ko shamar kar
    meri chahton ka sila na dee
    tujhe kabhi milain furstain
    meri sham ko phir sawar dee
    ju katal karna hai katal kar
    yun jadaion ki saza na dee

  10. 10 shayariadab November 12, 2007 at 11:55 am

    Mudassar, aapne bohot achcha likha hai.

  11. 11 abdul haq November 22, 2007 at 11:48 am

    kisne kaha hai hum tumko bhul gaye
    aai dost ye afva kise aur ne udaye hogi
    shaan se rahege tere dil me
    itne dino me kuch to jaga banai hoge

  12. 12 shayariadab November 22, 2007 at 12:13 pm

    Bohot khoob Abdull..thanks for writing here

  13. 13 abdul haq November 28, 2007 at 11:15 am

    sirf yadoo ke silsila rehgaya
    khuda jane unse hamara kya rishta rehgaya
    ek chand chupke gaya jane kaha
    ek sitara use dhund to reh gaya


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