Abhi na jaao chorh ke…!

Just a humble request to readers…If you like my poetry and share it at any other site, please write with my reference because a poet writes with lots of emotions and seeing that work under someone else’s name is very painful ! 

Mausam ka ishaara hai abhi na jaaiye

Tod ke yoon dil humara, na jaaiye !

 

Bahaar ke rang ghule hain fizaaon main

Bahaar ke aanchal se uth kar na jaaiye !

 

Zamane ki gardishen ruk to nahin jayengi

Dunya ki khatir humko chorh ke na jaaiye !

 

Jaane se aapke rooth ke baithe hain hum

Ab humko manane ki khatir hi na jaaiye !

 

Aankhon ki chamak humse chupate hain aap kyun

Aarzuon ne li hain angdaaiyan, abhi na jaaiye ! 

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14 Responses to “Abhi na jaao chorh ke…!”


  1. 1 depanshu March 6, 2008 at 6:51 am

    nice shayari…………
    good keep it up/….

  2. 2 shayariadab March 6, 2008 at 12:03 pm

    Thanks a lot Depanshu 🙂

  3. 3 rama March 17, 2008 at 7:04 pm

    Liknay ka andaaz aapka bahut he niraala hai
    aisa koi saath milay ye ada bhi niraala hai

  4. 4 shayariadab March 17, 2008 at 11:56 pm

    Thanks a lot Rama for your sweet comment 🙂

  5. 5 samnoj April 5, 2008 at 3:45 pm

    wow …. wow

    baht hi acha lkha hai

    fantastic

  6. 6 Ian April 8, 2008 at 2:29 pm

    teri shabdon mein khudko kahin paya tha maine,
    aur unhi mein kahin kho diya,
    muskurana sikhaya tha tune jin aankhon ko,
    hanste hue un aankho ne ro diya!!!

    nice job…this poem of yours. m a poet myself. get in touch if possible.
    ian.

  7. 7 shayariadab April 8, 2008 at 2:38 pm

    Shukriya..zarra nawazi hai aapki

  8. 8 RITZ April 9, 2008 at 3:05 pm

    Khoobsurat

  9. 9 shayariadab April 17, 2008 at 10:40 am

    tah-e-dil se shukriya aapa RITZ 🙂

  10. 10 shayariadab April 17, 2008 at 10:42 am

    Thanks a lot Ian, you can always contact me on my blog 🙂

  11. 11 perabh May 3, 2008 at 1:48 pm

    hi din beetay jo aap ke sath kabhi na bhool payenge jab yaad tumari aayegii aankhon se aansoo bhi aayenge

  12. 13 Tosha June 7, 2008 at 10:39 pm

    Bahut hi piyara likha hai Talat aap ne.!! Hope everything is going on fine. jalad hi aao se baat kerte hai 🙂

  13. 14 shayariadab June 16, 2008 at 3:06 pm

    Thanks so much Tosha 🙂 I m so busy these days……..but hope to meet you there soon….take care


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